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Calendar - Our Production Plan

Can’t see it

 

Locations

you should have pictures from a recce     How are you getting access to Woolwich Poly?

 

Potential Errors

Who wrote this cause I’ve read it 4 times now!

 

Progress, Ideas and Discussion

I can’t watch this video YouTube have blocked it for copyright – YOU SHOULD HAVE NOTICED THIS

 

Blog Feedback

Where are your comments on your feedback?

 

Digital Pack Analysis

Change the dimensions, it doesn’t fit

 

Capitalisum, creativity and the crisis in the music industry –

also spot the spelling mistake which Leanne DID MENTION IN YOUR FEEDBACK!

 

This serves no purpose as you have just copied and pasted you haven’t passed any comment on what you have understood from it or how this will impact on your artist in conjunction with the production of the digipak

 

Major Labels vs. Independent Labels

 

Copying and pasting from Wikipedia doesn’t constitute as research what it actual mean is that ‘I’m lazy’. You should be referencing where you are copying and pasting from and commenting on what knowledge you have gained and how this contribute to your project or even better read the research on the internet put it in your own words and reference whereyou got your knowledge from. You have actually got a really good video if you comment on it would be better.

 

As much as I love your visuals you also need to make relevant commentary on Big Four

Adorno and Horkheimers Theory some quotes in this would be good and also linking it to your artist

 

The Breif

SPELLING!

 

Paradise - Coldplay (Directed by Mat Whitecross)

This lacks detail and clearly you have NOT EVEN BOTHERED TO ACTION LEANNES FEEDBACK because she already mentioned this.

 

 

• I have now hopefully sorted the problem with the production plan and not being able to see it. 

• I have now changed the locations write up into my own words to avoid mix-up with copying fellow group mates.

•  I have now also added a post on Iconic Album Artworks with links to boosh.

Above is the feedback given by one of the course tutors. I feel that I still need to add a lot to my blog, I do understand the individual work load needed for the is high, but as a group we where told we can share the task of some the posts that are relate-able to our group work, such as location when that will be the same for all our groups. Id understand and will take on board the comments but the fact that I have been accused of copying all from other members is bit strong since there is no evidence to who did what task. This needs to be made clearer and we will discuss this as a group.